Weeel . . . not as exuberant as some of them there writers on Literotica!
I howled like a wolf with him on my back. I was the Roman warship and he was the slave rower, accelerating to Ramming Speed until we crashed into the enemy ship in a blaze of orgasmic ecstasy, spreading the Greek Fire of our boiling sperm all over the universe!I was his oil derrick, balanced on my head and hands while he fucked down into me, drilling into the hot oil of my guts. I was a prisoner of war tortured with his magnificent stake up my hole, forced to sit on him until I revealed the secret: "I surrender! You're too much for me! The secret is--"
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Buwahaha! I tell you, Literotica is...well...no words. LOL
This person does have a certain flair though. LOL
*speechless in awe*
That's just... well as a reader I can't describe it, but I bet that was a blast to write! Would that be a point where we need to steer away from certain lyrical tomfoolery?
"boiling Sperm"
*snort*
"Magnificent stake"
*double snort*
Exuberant is one word for it, I suppose!
I must confess, I would love to pull out all the stops and write a story in this "style"... and then submit it to certain publishers (not the ones I have now, of course). If that bugger got published -- and better yet, got skewered at, say, Dear Author -- it would make my year!
Yes, Jen, the "boiling sperm"-- that was my fave!
"boiling Sperm"
EEUW!
OW! My brain! I can't get the image of a pot on a stove out of my mind!!
AYEE!
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